
Originally Posted by
noics20
This is your first story? You should be proud. That was incredible. After skimming to get an idea of the length I wasn't sure how much of it I was going to get through, but I ended up reading the entire thing in one sitting. If anything I didn't want it to end. I loved the relentless nature of the fight and how these two just kept going. I also really enjoyed the gradual transition from a 'test of strength' fight to a battle that was more sexual in nature as their lust took over. The build-up was really well done. The bond that they developed over the course of the fight - a passionate mix of friendship and rivalry - was probably my favorite part of the story.
Your style reminds me lot of Lotus and the equally matched characters/fights in his stories. Considering he was one of my favorite authors, it's always nice finding works similar to his, while still doing their own thing. Can't wait to see what you put out next - whether it's a follow-up with Stacey and Hannah or new characters altogether, I'll definitely be reading it.
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